"My characters’ desires and motivations were clear in my head but not on the page. Sarah helped me clarify and deepen their desires and motivations so that readers would know who the characters really were on a deeper level. With keen insight, she identified pivotal turning points in my story and gave me great suggestions on how to set those up earlier so that they would impact the reader greater and take the reader on the journey, not just tell them what happened. Sarah was invaluable to my writing process. "